Active/Passive Comparison

 

By Dakota Balmore

 

Wofford Foundling Hospital Passive Description 2003

 

At 4:00 that afternoon, dressed in my familiar old raggedy togs, I stood at the front gate of the Wofford Foundling Hospital on Guilford Street looking up at the three-story wooden structure. The entire hospital was of a plain design. The building had one giant peaked roof in the center connecting two wings that came out towards me on either side. Across its width were two huge rows of arches. The ground floor archways allowed people to walk through to the doors that lay inside some of them. The sets on the second and third floors appeared to be there only for the purpose of design. Each wing had bulging block-shaped towers melted directly into the corners. A small peaked roof crowned each tower.

     The windows, and there were many them, were all set in even rows. They were dirty and of ordinary design like those of a prison. There was a large space between the uppermost row of windows on the third floor of the towers and the top of the building. In that space every twenty feet round the tower and across the connecting structure were carved wooden circles, the likenesses of which were the cycles of the moon in quarters. A simple raised circle painted in black represented the new moon. The other three phases had the visible part of the moon in white, and in all the white areas were the gray markings as seen on the real moon. There were only four phases but they repeated all round the building. It all looked rather eerie, like something out of a horror story.

     Walking across the huge open courtyard area to the ground floor arches, I was certain the mood created by the design of the place was right for what I was about to find behind the scary, cracked, and well-worn oak doors inside the centermost archway. It was odd, but all my life I lived close to this house of suffering and never once had I gone inside. But who could blame a young girl after hearing the horrid things that happened inside those walls of loneliness.

     Wofford was a place where our society hid away its dirty little secret of modern civilization. It hid away a world in which women were running round getting carelessly pregnant and dumping their unwanted children off so they could go out and do it again. It hid the world of the poor, who, up to a point, were barely able to care for their children, and, falling on hard times by a society that pushed them to succeed or starve, forced them to abandon their children in a tradeoff for their survival. And whilst in wealthy London, it was business as usual. Brokers used my father’s Commodities Exchange Market to link buyers and sellers for making handsome profits. Bankers took in the working man’s wages, invested it, and lived like royalty off the gains. All this was going on round this building whilst it choked to the rim with unwanted, thrown away human flesh. And I had to enter its world through no choice of my own.

     I went up to the doors, pushed them open, took a deep breath, and went inside.

 

Wofford Foundling Hospital More Active Revision 2005

 

At four in the afternoon, dressed in my familiar raggedy housedress, I stood at the front gate of the Wofford Foundling Hospital on Guilford Street staring up at the eerie, three-story, wooden structure.

     One giant, peaked roof in the center of it connected two wings that charged out at me on either side daring me to approach. Across its width ran two huge rows of arches one atop the other. The ground floor archways allowed people to walk through to the doors that lay inside some of them. The arches on the upper floors appeared to exist solely for the purpose of decoration, but they could very well have been put there architecturally to represent the arches of Hell. Each wing bulged with short, block-shaped towers sprouting from their corners with a small peaked roof crowning each tower.

     The even rows of the many windows defined the personality of the structure as rigid. Dirty and blandly designed, they appeared more like those of a prison with their dark interiors crying out, commanding you to flee or surrender your freedom for eternity. A wide area between the uppermost row of windows and the top of the building bulged with carved wooden circles like warts on a haggard old beggar woman. Spaced every twenty feet across the connecting structure between the towers, the likenesses of the cycles of the moon in quarters warned of evil wizards within. Perhaps if Merlin the Magician from Camelot had lived today, he would have chosen such a dwelling for his residence.

     A simple raised circle painted in black represented the new moon. On the other three phases, the visible part of the moon shone white, and in all the white areas gray markings as seen on the real moon grew like an invading mold. Four phases repeated round the building, and their magical, foreboding qualities hinted at sinister goings on within—perhaps something as bizarre as the mutilation of human corpses like in a Mary Shelley horror story.

     Trudging across the huge open courtyard to the ground floor arches, the mood created by the design of the place conjured up an atmosphere of spirits and ghosts even in the daylight.

     All my life I had lived near this house of suffering, and never once had I stepped inside. Who could blame a young girl after hearing the horrid transgressions that haunted those walls of harrowing devastation?

     Wofford existed as a place where our society hid away its dirty little secret of modern civilization. It kept in clandestine seclusion a world in which promiscuous women ran round getting pregnant and dumped their unwanted children so they could go out and commit irresponsibility again. It hid the world of the poor, who were hardly able to care for their children. Falling on hard times, the society pushed the poorest to succeed or starve and forced them to abandon their children in a tradeoff for their survival.

     Whilst in wealthy London, business flourished as usual. Brokers used my father’s Commodities Exchange Market to link buyers and sellers for making handsome profits. Bankers devoured the working man’s wages, invested them, and lived like royalty off the gains. Prosperity raged all round this building whilst it choked to the rim with discarded, unwanted human flesh. Now, I had to plunge into its world through no choice of my own.

     I trudged up to the doors, pushed them open, drew in a deep breath, and lumbered inside.